Blog feedback

Student Name	What’s missing	What’s good?	What needs improving?
BRADSHAW Emma	·          Analysis/research. ·          Planning (script, storyboard etc) for Prelim task. ·          Final Prelim task	Well laid out. Good use of a range of technologies so far. Some good level of analysis. Well presented work.	·          A lot of research tasks need uploading, blog is full of empty posts.
BULL Eleana	·          Storyboard for Prelim. ·          Final prelim task.	Well presented. Good use of a range of technology for presenting work. Some detailed analysis. Good understanding of the conventions.	·          On Camera movements, possibly link to how these types can be used in a horror film and what ‘message’; the shot type could express. ·          Some blank posts need filling
CANNING Max	·          Ideas/brainstorm for preliminary ·          Edited film. ·          Brief evaluation of prelim.	Well presented Varied use of technology to present research.	·          Comment on the film logo post – what are you hoping to learn from this/purpose of post.
CONSUL Van Abner	·          Brief evaluation of prelim. ·          9 frame storyboard of existing films ·          Timelines of film openings	Excellent storyboards Well presented animatic. Some good focus on audience.	·          Comment on what was learnt/point of including top ten horror. ·
DUFFY Kelsey	·          Timelines of film openings ·          Moving image analysis.	Well structured. Some very good analytical points made Some use of technology shown.	·          Blog needs keeping up to date. ·          A lot of empty posts which need uploading. ·          Posts with analysis in seem to not work (video clips)
EDWARDS Hannah	·          Prelim tasks ·          Opening timelines ·          9 frame storyboards of film openings	Good analysis so far Range of technology used.	·          Keep blog up to date ·          Upload tasks as they are done.
FARMER Max	·          Brief evaluation for prelim. ·          Brief summary/concept of your film in 25 words or less.	Range of technology Some good analysis Up to date blog.	·          Credit/acknowledge that Van drew the storyboard. ·          Remember to include stuff on target audience for your film.
JARVIS Flynn	·          Timeline of film openings ·          Script/storyboard of prelim task ·          Brief evaluation of prelim.	Range of technology to present work/research. Well presented Good understanding of how film opening work.	·          Comment on what was learnt/the point of posting top grossing horror films lists. How did it help your project?
MILLETT-DEISEROTH Emily	·          Prelim planning and brief evaluation of prelim ·          Prelim video	Good level of analysis Some good use of technology	·          A lot of empty posts which need uploading. ·          Keep blog up to date
RODGERS Zak	·          Preliminary script and final film. ·           Timeline and 9 frame shots of film openings.	Detailed analysis Varied technology Well presented blog	·          Continually update blog with development for main task, notes and idea developments.
WOODHOUSE Zoe	·          Preliminary film and planning need adding.	Variety of presentational methods used. Well presented work.	·          Analysis of what questionnaire results show. ·          Consider what was learnt from looking at existing openings and how it impacts on yours. ·          Some links/analysis seem to not work (7even etc)